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Peter S Bradley's avatar

I read Blish's Black Easter back in the 1970s when I was a teenager.

The ending was a gut punch.

Brandon Hendrickson's avatar

I also guessed the AI answer! For me, it was two things: (1) the em dash, surrounded by spaces (which it seems like ChatGPT has recently segued to using... it used to be only me who did that, and I was breaking the style guides), and (2) this one line:

>> "If you bounce off names like “Hierarch Voyle” and “Knights Exemplar” and “Menoth’s Fury” you’re going to have a rough time."

It was a funny line — I actually chuckled! — but funny in a shallow way. There's something about the phrase "bounce off" that I both like, and feels empty. Not sure what to do with that.

Thanks for the Easter-morning thinking puzzle.

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